Take a look at some of their work. See if you can find examples of language like using first and second person, repetition, asking rhetorical questions, the rule of three and using anecdotes.
Boston
Rugby Rugby Rugby ever wondered what it will be like to play rugby well it is scary for your first time. But you become better as you practice and practice. But there is a possibility you can get bumped off or injured. So who wants to volunteer
Tim
Hey you! Over there and you, you too. Have you ever imagined yourself as a youtuber? Well if you have or have not, I will be sharing three magnificent tips because I believe that some of you guys will someday grow up as a youtuber, no!, not to be a bored, powerless youtuber like your Mum and Dad, “heh do’en some calculation on tax and bills”, but to be a FAMOUS Youtuber! So turn on your ears and keep listening.
Jiya
Colours, colours, colours so many remarkable colours to think about! Have you ever imagined what it would be like if we had a bit more radiance in our school? When I mean that I mean what if we had mufti in our school everyday? Our school would be more famous, we would have freedom plus the uniforms are much too expensive.
Sheena
Hands up those of who likes chocolates? Wow that's great. My favorite chocolates is smarties. My mom once said that life is a box of chocolates you never know what you’re going to get next. Well today I’m gonna take you journey which a little nutty, a little chewy and a little bitter, but mostly sweet.
That's a great start Room 3, make sure you check if your introductions makes sense. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteLooks like you have some unique speech topics Rm 3.Maybe you could try to add some more interesting vocabulary. Overall I think you did a great job in hooking in the reader.
ReplyDeleteGreat intro for a amazing speech, next time try use more language features like similes and some metaphors. I can' t wait to hear the finalists.
ReplyDeleteWell done Rm 3, I like how you repeated the same words to engage the audience! Can't wait for you guys to finish.
ReplyDeleteI like how they used different types of sentences but next time try to use the correct punctuation in some places.
ReplyDeleteThese are great speech introductions - very impressive to see you using these techniques.
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